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yeah i'm not even trying to stop anymore. one piece it is, no matter what! hancock is another character i just fell in love with at the first sight - though, isn't that kinda expected you know, that's what happens when you see her. also she's super adorable when swooning over luffy, hehe

eh, i might not be the right person to draw the most beautiful woman in the world because i really suck at drawing women, don't do that too often for some reason... i either make them too manly or, uh, overly sexy. BUT NOW that's alright because it's hancock right ;_; ah but time to start practicing, i guess. so many things to practice.

is there anyone kind enough to help me a bit and maybe give some critique? especially on her face and legs. i'm afraid i can't properly see the faults myself. i probably won't fix them on this picture but will make some redlines for myself.
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~Aatelismorso Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The way her legs are connected, and the right thigh curves looks unnatural, and it should be a tad bit more thick, and the shape of her head is slightly cubistic, you might want to round it up more from the top next time. Believe me, I'm no expert on anatomy myself, but those corrections I suggested could make this one just a bit better. What's good is the fact that you made her the slim beauty she is in the series, using soft shades and tones. I also like the little cats you added there :D They add a nice comic relief to the whole imo. The pattern on her dress looks outright gorgeous! I suck at clothing myself and need to practice that area too, but it's good to see someone has the time and talent to do them properly.

The shading, colours and light are just where they are supposed to be, not just about there, and the folds on Salome add to the realistic look of this piece. All in all, beautiful, even though I like darker tones and hard contrast personally, this one is great as it is. Try studying anatomy a bit and do some sketches to practice your skills on it, I've noticed it helps tremendously in improving art. Hopefully this was good enough for critique. I haven't gained nearly any myself, but I like giving it when there's need. Hopefully this was fair in your opinion, and I didn't point out mistakes too harshly!
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~SUPARIO Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist
thanks, this is exactly the kinda feedback i was looking for! though i have to say, the piece's months old already and i've noticed many of those mistakes myself (or that's what i want to think, haha). but you gave me some good advice nonetheless, i'm going to keep those things in mind and maybe make one more redline of this piece. thanks again!
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~Aatelismorso Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eipä kestä :D Kävin kahtoo sinun profiiliasi ja yllätyin hiukkasen, ku avatarin alla oli mainittuna Soomi. Tosiaan, kuvahan olikin hiukkasen iäkkäämpi, mutta hyvin tehty kokonaisuutena :D Käyn stalkkailemassa uudempaa settiä, jos löytyisi jotain mielenkiintoisa. Ainakin Monet ja Caesar vialhtivat etusivulla :3
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Mood: Love =MatijaDesign Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sigh* unzip :D
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~seekmsn Feb 21, 2013
poor kitty, but Hancock is beautiful here. I love her hair and her legs, that is her greatest sex appeal.
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~SUPARIO Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist
thank you!
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~Rukunetsu Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing.
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~SUPARIO Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist
thank you!
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~Yuna-chi Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
*-* really nice pic!!!
but poor kitty! XD
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~SUPARIO Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
heh, thanks!
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