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the pirate empress by SUPARIO the pirate empress by SUPARIO
yeah i'm not even trying to stop anymore. one piece it is, no matter what! hancock is another character i just fell in love with at the first sight - though, isn't that kinda expected you know, that's what happens when you see her. also she's super adorable when swooning over luffy, hehe

eh, i might not be the right person to draw the most beautiful woman in the world because i really suck at drawing women, don't do that too often for some reason... i either make them too manly or, uh, overly sexy. BUT NOW that's alright because it's hancock right ;_; ah but time to start practicing, i guess. so many things to practice.

is there anyone kind enough to help me a bit and maybe give some critique? especially on her face and legs. i'm afraid i can't properly see the faults myself. i probably won't fix them on this picture but will make some redlines for myself.
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HeadofRed Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow your works are amazing! :O
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Student
thank you!
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HeadofRed Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
do you take commissions? :O
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student
i do, yeah, though i don't have a price sheet ready. throw me a note for more info if interested.
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Muse-of-the-Earth Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think you suck at drawing women at all. She's gorgeous, and so is the rest of the picture. :)
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student
thanks! the picture's a year old tho', nowadays i'm a bit more confident in drawing females, haha.
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Muse-of-the-Earth Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Either way, you're a visually stunning artist.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student
ah, thanks again!
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Muse-of-the-Earth Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Quite welcome ^^
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Aedua Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
OMG, poor kitty! :D
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You-Know-My-Name101 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013   General Artist
here's what Brook would have said, "excuse, may i see your panties!"
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student
hehe.
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moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Salome's got a big head.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student
yeah, i did make him bigger than he actually is for this picture. artist's freedom, heh!
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moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Right.:nod:
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Aatelismorso Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The way her legs are connected, and the right thigh curves looks unnatural, and it should be a tad bit more thick, and the shape of her head is slightly cubistic, you might want to round it up more from the top next time. Believe me, I'm no expert on anatomy myself, but those corrections I suggested could make this one just a bit better. What's good is the fact that you made her the slim beauty she is in the series, using soft shades and tones. I also like the little cats you added there :D They add a nice comic relief to the whole imo. The pattern on her dress looks outright gorgeous! I suck at clothing myself and need to practice that area too, but it's good to see someone has the time and talent to do them properly.

The shading, colours and light are just where they are supposed to be, not just about there, and the folds on Salome add to the realistic look of this piece. All in all, beautiful, even though I like darker tones and hard contrast personally, this one is great as it is. Try studying anatomy a bit and do some sketches to practice your skills on it, I've noticed it helps tremendously in improving art. Hopefully this was good enough for critique. I haven't gained nearly any myself, but I like giving it when there's need. Hopefully this was fair in your opinion, and I didn't point out mistakes too harshly!
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student
thanks, this is exactly the kinda feedback i was looking for! though i have to say, the piece's months old already and i've noticed many of those mistakes myself (or that's what i want to think, haha). but you gave me some good advice nonetheless, i'm going to keep those things in mind and maybe make one more redline of this piece. thanks again!
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Aatelismorso Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eipä kestä :D Kävin kahtoo sinun profiiliasi ja yllätyin hiukkasen, ku avatarin alla oli mainittuna Soomi. Tosiaan, kuvahan olikin hiukkasen iäkkäämpi, mutta hyvin tehty kokonaisuutena :D Käyn stalkkailemassa uudempaa settiä, jos löytyisi jotain mielenkiintoisa. Ainakin Monet ja Caesar vialhtivat etusivulla :3
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MatijaDesign Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sigh* unzip :D
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seekmsn Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
poor kitty, but Hancock is beautiful here. I love her hair and her legs, that is her greatest sex appeal.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student
thank you!
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Rukunetsu Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student
thank you!
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Yuna-chi Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
*-* really nice pic!!!
but poor kitty! XD
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student
heh, thanks!
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Yuna-chi Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
you're welcome! ^^
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NellyPixit Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
The poor Cat :iconnotamusedplz:
Wait, there's a second one! Why didn't i notice them earlier?

well, i would say, that the linework is really cool and so, but her skin in her face seems a lil bit odd. It just seems like her face would have a totally different color than the rest of her body. (Or she used so much makeup :P)
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student
ahh maybe i left the black cat too black after all

really? maybe it's the lack of shadows on her face, i kinda noticed that at some point but didn't pay too much attention on it... well, thanks for your comment!
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NellyPixit Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well, maybe not X'D I didn't see the other cat either :D I just read the other comment and found a "OMG! THIS POOR CAT" and thet i thought: 'Which cat...?Ö.Ö'

i only saw them at the second/third view x'D
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student
haha, well, there is some stuff in the picture that can easily take your attention away...
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NellyPixit Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I can't help ;P Hancock is such a nice view :iconmegustaplz:
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NellyPixit Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
The poor Cat :iconnotamusedplz:
Wait, there's a second one! Why didn't i notice them earlier?

well, i would say, that the linework is really cool and so, but her skin in her face seems a lil bit odd. It just seems like her face would have a totally different color than the rest of her body. (Or she used so much makeup :P)
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moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Was Salome's head always that huge?:O_o:

AH! THAT POOR KITTEN!:iconomgwtfbbqplz:
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student
haha nope, just wanted him to bigger for this picture
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moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Ah.
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maxprodanov Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
That's a joyous smile on the cat, not a shriek of agony.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student
haha, alright, if that's how you want it to be.
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Arlek-Orjoman Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Those darn legs mate, those darn legs.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student
glad you can enjoy them (i hope).
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Arlek-Orjoman Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yes indeed. Good work.
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KaleiC Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool as Hancock is, I am adoring the expression on her snake here. Can't offer critique either, can't draw girls meself.
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student
it's cool, thanks!
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scarlet-pearll Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Interface Designer
lol at the cat under her butt xD
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student
heheh
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Wings-chan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So beautiful :iconblushplz:
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student
thanks!
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Wings-chan Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome ^^
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Zucon Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
.....@o@ *kyyläystä* dem boobs, legs and dat ass, ja reps raukka kissa! ...tai sitte se on järkyttyny onnesta tollasen herkkupepun istuttua sen päälle köhköhnytmeevähänköhköh, niin.
Tää on mahtava kuva, kuten osas odottaa sulta B)) muttamutta me likes vaatetuksen kuvioinnit ja laskostukset, taitoskohat mitkä lie näyttää hyviltä! (Tottunu omiin töherryksiin joissa kaks viivaa kuvaamassa ruttukasaa paidan helmassa ja housujen lahkeissa tms...)
Itte en niinkää oo seurannu One Piece:a, mitä nyt pari jaksoa katoin sillon espanjassa ollessa... ei oikeen napannu mun kohalla, mutta mittää huonoa en voi siitä sanoa 8D
Ja kritiikkiä minä en voi antaa, en oo piirtäny sen vertaa, että voisin sunlaiselle ihmiselle alkaa pälpättämmää anatomiasta tai muusta ku ite en tajua hölkäsen pöläystä niistä ;__; mutta lisäälisää eukkoja! Harjotus tekee mestarin..! (Kys. sanonta ei koske mua)
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SUPARIO Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student
jeee kiva että tykätään (vaikka sitten tisseistä), kiitos!
psst jos one pieceä yhtään kiinnostaa vielä kokeilla niin suosittelen erittäin lämpimästi aloittamaan lainaamalla muutaman ekan mangapokkarin kirjastosta ; ) se animu on ihan käsittämätöntä kuraa ekat 200 jaksoa
höh kyllä mä nyt sun luottaisin näkevän että millanen on sopusuhtainen nainen, ei siihen taiteellista silmää ees tarvii! vaikka sitäkin sulla kyllä on vaikket itse usko hmph
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Zucon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Asetigdsjk sanotaanko näin, että niistäkin~ Koko kuva on aika namnam @u@
Ja hmm, pittää yrittää kokeilla lainata seuraavan kerran kun kirjastossa käyn 8D
Nojoo, mutta en kuitenkaa löyä mittää parannettavaa kuvasta, koska...KOSKA. X]
Kvaak
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